Hmm, nowadays your poems are making me to think alot,lol.
you always give away inspire messages through your wonderful poems.
another great one dude.
this was short but full of meaning and also i must say the flow and rhyme were just amazing.
keep it up like always.

I really love this poem..........great work and can you check out some of my poems and tell me what you think.thankz....and 5/5......

GREAT POEM!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey!..Great poem!...this is just Beautiful!...short though..but so nicely written!
Superb flow!..Loved it!
Tk care!..sure 5/5
xxPoojaxx

Lol, that's a cool poem. You used only one sounding rhyme all along, and I don't see that a lot, which makes the poem unique. I liked it alot! plus it gives a nice message:)

I liked the rhyme
It was cool
Not many people can rhyme one word for two stanzas
Great job!

Awhh. I loved how you made the whole poem with just one rhyme. That was really unique. I think this was more dark than miscellaneous because some of the frazes were quite dark. I liked the simple effect of the poem as well. Overall, nicely done. 5/5

Amazing, you truly have a talent, excellent work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Few words ... often convey more! And this write did. Nice job.