Comments : Should I stay or should I GO........

  • 17 years ago

    by Tinkerbell

    I love this poem thanks for the comment on mine!

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Hey good poem, i think however if he loves you he should show you he does! you deserve to be treated like a princess and he should, if you think he could treat you better i think you know your answer, i hope all is well for you xxxxxxxxxx take kare honey xxxxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Navy Blue Heart

    Wow, is this based on a real life experience because it feels absolutely genuine. It's really sophisticated and I know exactly where you're coming from with it, I think to many of us have experienced something like this. Well done, great poem and thanks for the comment on mine :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    In answer to your question ,you should go..if you ever have to ask yourself that, the answer is clear..
    great work

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Cool, nice poem if this is a real life situation i believe you to be hasty and irrational, know for sure. nice poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Oh yeah, its true action speak louder than words, but words speak things that are deeper. remember that and if you trully love him youll have faith in him.

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Thanks for your comment.
    please try and be more original with your poems. mor epeople would be more interested if love poems werent always about the same thing.

    anyways 4.5

  • 17 years ago

    by IWroteYouAPoemOnMyWrist

    I love it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lithium

    Interesting combinations in your lines, i like your idea, and structure of writing, well done xox lithium

  • 17 years ago

    by PoeticalHeartless

    Ii LYK DiiZ POEM ii CUD RELATE 2 iiT A LOT. ND THANXSZ FO DA COMMENT ON MA POEM LOLSZ TAKE KARE =)

  • 17 years ago

    by marlene

    This poem is so ggod keep it up :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleyy

    This is a good poem
    you deserve to be treated right.
    he shouldnt be treating you badly
    guys r not always nice plain and simple
    some r sweet but their isnt to many
    if hes going to treat yu the way it seems he isnt then he isnt even worth your time
    and you ending up getting heartbroken.
    very good poem though.
    keep it up hun.

    Ashleyy

  • 17 years ago

    by Miu

    Good poem. You written out exactly what u feeling... I felt like it was a little bit forced but overall a great poem. I hope things work out good for you. Keep up the great work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Eternalsunshine

    I like this, this is really good. I feel that you have expressed your feelings well. I have the exact problem. :(

  • 17 years ago

    by Rhiannon

    I really like this!!

  • 17 years ago

    by k i k i

    I can relate; very well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by the lost mind

    Nice indeed this poem is so much like my life except that i'm the guy and the girl was making me ask myself that not the other way around lol but alas thanks for leaving a comment i thought i'd return the favour

  • 17 years ago

    by the lost mind

    Nice indeed this poem is so much like my life except that i'm the guy and the girl was making me ask myself that not the other way around lol but alas thanks for leaving a comment i thought i'd return the favour

  • 17 years ago

    by Nessa

    I like that poem did u go through diz or u jus thought of it and wrote it? But good job

  • 17 years ago

    by alyssa montero

    Wow..ive never read a poem that i can relate to so much.. your very talented an thank u for my comments i will continue to write as well as you should.