Comments : Death is decieving

  • 17 years ago

    by Alma

    This is such a beautiful poem its simple but says all their is to say sometimes your not sure of your purpose or your meaning and think it might be better if i never happened. but we must all find something to live for i hope you find your reason soon.

  • 17 years ago

    by moonlil

    Hey James!
    I like your poem. It is very touching and with so much emotions. It is also so sad and I hope that you don't feel this way anymore cause you know what will happen then. I wont tell it on here now! But i think you know what I mean. Keep it up!! I love your poems.