Wow great poem . your an amazing poet. i couldnt have wrote it better great jobbb!
5\5!

love erin

That was an excellent write. Even though the rythm of the poem isnt apparent, it was strong enough to warp me in to ur word totally.
Havent read ur poems in a while but it seems like you're still knocking them out there... hehe... ne whoo ... take care... n g'day = ) hehe.. Love.

- Thuggy

I love the idea of the poem, very well done, vocabulary and the idea strings you in, lovely. I give 5/5

Great poem! i luv tha way u worded it n everything! ur a great poet.. 5/5