OMG!...this is just sooo beautiful!...short n sweet...very sad though but anyways well written!
Kp up de good job!
5/5!
xx Pooja xx

Beautifully wriiten, heartfelt. Short sweet, and to the point, I like this, the flow was flawless, the emtion was strong, and clea, andt the word choice was amazing. 5/5 once again

Short and sweet its good but sad goodjob tho keep it up~melissaraye~