Comments : Flowers in the Wind

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Very good poem. I liked it, it had very good imagery and you explained everything very good, but the last line might sound and flow a bit better if you make it..
    "Love is all that those around you know"

    Anyways, good poem
    5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bill
    Beautiful poem. Imagery is excellent. I could see your dancing and singing flowers :)

    Your beauty reflecting in all you do
    As your magic garden flourishes and grows
    Love is all around you, dancing in the wind

    Love your ending.
    Take care your friend Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Amazing, you truly have a talent, excellent work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

    Best Wishes
    Wallace

  • 16 years ago

    by hani

    Very nice and beautiful

  • 16 years ago

    by Deana

    This gives the reader a feeling of a lighthearted ,pleasant spring day. great imagery.