I really liked this poem till it got to the ending, I'm not a big fan of cutting poems so the ending kind of ruined the feeling that I was getting throughout the peice. However everything up until that point was preaty good. I really liked the metaphore of a flower hidden in the dark. nice work.

Y do u alluays end up with opened wrists? be inventiv cut uor troat!....
me like paula, mi like...

The ending, again, seemed forced. Be very careful of that.

Like a flower hidden in the dark
It ain't the scar, it ain't the mark
[[I LOVED these lines. Beautiful!]]

I liked this, but again, I would have made it longer and placed more detail into it.. detail always makes a stronger poem.

Anyways.
Nice job.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex5.5

Its a very simple poem but explains alot..
i like it