Hey!...a beautifully written dark poem!....so powerful n lovely!Great write!5/5
Tk care!
xxPoojaxx

That was amazing. where did you come up with that? I don't believe that I have ever read anything quite like it, the imgery was vivid, the word choice and vocab was awesome, and the flow was absoulty flawless. Again you have done an excellent job on such a dark poem 5/5

That is mad! I love it so dark...so evil. well done.

Another great poem. It was like a short story. It was very good and would make a great movie if you wanted it to. Keep up the great work:) 5/5

Waiting to escape their cages
Caged by resistance and control
[[Putting "cages" like that right next to each other really kills the mood.]]
Caution thrown to the wolves
Amongst the backhanded comments
And sarcastic whips
[[I love the above lines. Amazing imagery.]]

Although you don't rhyme, I really like it. I didn't feel much emotion, but I surely felt something.
Nicely done.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5