HOLY SHIZNIT!
I remember this poem.
I did NOT realize it was from you though.
Is this a year old?
Or older?
I think it is.
Because I remember reading this when I was younger.
Or maybe this wasn't the poem... just something extremely like it.
But I was reading, and I remember almost crying.
I don't cry, dearie.
The poem was okay...
The topic you chose is the best.
I refuse to write one it, though.
It would feel like I'm plagiarizing your peice.

I feel like saying
Redundancy is power
Because in this case, it is.
I don't think this is the best poem you can do.
But it is the most touching, at least for me.
I would say you've got potential to be the best
But no, I think you're already one of the best in this site.
Back to this poem.
I'm just not into simplicity, it's me.
I like complicated stuff.
But then the stuff that I like are forced.
This was simple and flowed.
Although it feels like you wrote it for little kids.
I know less is more.
But maybe you could add
A bit of vocabulary there without ruining
This peice.
Sorry if you were offended :]
I'll give you a 5/5 for this one, though