Hey,
I was meant to comment on this poem last week. Congratulations on winning the club contest. :) Anyways, this is a really emotional peace of writing. It shows how much you care about whoever your writing this about. It was quite short yet really sweet and emotional. I thought this belongs more in the sad section of the website though. Or maybe friedship. The flow of the poem was good though a little sketchy at times. It was an emotional peace. To improve it i suggest you use punctuation. Otehr then thata good read. Keep writing! xx