Yep, I enjoyed reading it!
5/5 again, keep it up!

The imagery was vivid and clear, the flow was flawless, and amazing, the word choice was strong, and the emtions were deep. Everything seemed to be perfect in this well penned poem. 5/5

Im hoping for your all wishes to come true, i hope god listen to you and to those who need it.
this was another exellent poem with a great style and rhyme, this ABCB poems are my favorite, they have the best tone in reading, that is why once in my life i thought poetry was just this style,lol.
the other thing that make this poem so great is the way you are like telling a story so i read each line wanting to know what happened next, another 5/5 poem by you.

Interesting, not at good as some of your other work but don't get me wrong still very good. I enjoyed it, there was one part where i thought you lost it a little but nice ending and the rest was smooth. 5/5 great read

Well worded, excellent flow. I bet you already know this, but your a fantastic writer. Keep it up!!!

Josie