Comments : Here or on the Ground

  • 16 years ago

    by Darlena

    W0W. I love this poem. It's deep. I love it. Greatly written. Comment mine when ya get the chance. Thanx much appreciated.

  • 16 years ago

    by XSugarSexSuicideX

    I'm done fighting
    I'm on the ground,
    I can't feel your touch,
    Or hear your sound,
    I'm done asking
    For you to forgive,
    Because I'm done hoping
    That I can just live.