This is rather heartrending to read. Although it has a deficient consistency, the emotions which surges throughout is one of its major highlights.
Loved it otherwise. My pleasure to read it.
Love, Debbie

Oh, now I remember your telling me about this via PM...

My sincerest condolence for your loss, dear. Take care always.

Wow, this poem made me cry. Written well. I liked it alot. Keep up the good work 5/5
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