Dern, you done it again babe, i liked the song and i think this should be given to bush, maybe he will open his eyes finally, u hava a great imagination, and this shows such great imagery! love the flow, another 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

Dang girlll. Another amazing poem. The one about the pole dancer..that was soo sad! And the worst part is, its true. Way to speak out, I loved it!

I love this poem.
Its really sad, it nearly made me cry.
It flowed well and the meaning was shown.
The imagery was great.
Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

Your eyes see everything. Another excellent piece! 5/5

Josie

Well done very good you got talent hun keep writting

Ive already read this but, its so true. Im not really sure what to say though

5/5