Comments : The grave

  • 16 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    "i tell you i love you
    and i wonder can you hear?
    you've been gone so long
    but in my heart you're near"

    This stanza made me hold my breath :) this poem is amazing i gave it 5/5 but it should get 99/5 :)

  • 16 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    Very well. I Loved it. Written well. 5/5