Comments : You could never

  • 16 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    All I can say is wonderful and beautiful poem. It flowed like water.

    Great job,
    Keep the ink flowing.

    5/5
    ~Stephen White

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Beautiful beautiful work,.....n the flow was..lol....AMAZINGLY perfect....Kp up the good work...Loved it!!.....5/5!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Sweet but got the message across deeply i loved it it was so heart poured lol keep up the good work hun

    xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Hey this poem is awesome. Great job. 5/5
    -vino

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Very stong feelings. lovely. but there is one concept that you have used "i don't think" it made me sad a bit.. but i loved your this style
    you deserve 5/5

    takecare

  • 16 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    THEY SAID IT ALL.. 5/5