Horrible nightmare but excellent poem. Some great phrasing "deep blue grave" and intresting imagery "seaweed fingers at her legs claw". Another good job - 5/5.

Wow, just... Wow. You have an amazing imagination ^_^

Nice

This peice draws you in, I love it. Your imagination is great..
Amazing keep writting,
Elainex

That was very intense. i liked the switch at the end.

This is very scary and really dark Jackie. Gave me the shivers, fine writing, 5/5.

Very nice imaginative piece, 5/5. Em x