Comments : Water Fright

  • 12 years ago

    by Tony

    Horrible nightmare but excellent poem. Some great phrasing "deep blue grave" and intresting imagery "seaweed fingers at her legs claw". Another good job - 5/5.

  • 12 years ago

    by Chemistry

    Wow, just... Wow. You have an amazing imagination ^_^

  • 12 years ago

    by Jeremy B

    Nice

  • 12 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    This peice draws you in, I love it. Your imagination is great..
    Amazing keep writting,
    Elainex

  • 11 years ago

    by keithnwv

    That was very intense. i liked the switch at the end.

  • 11 years ago

    by Fran

    This is very scary and really dark Jackie. Gave me the shivers, fine writing, 5/5.

  • 10 years ago

    by Em

    Very nice imaginative piece, 5/5. Em x