Comments : Pinned down

  • 17 years ago

    by Ciao Bella

    Amazing poems its incredible...great job

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    I love this.
    It's very different from your usual, which is good, don't worry. =)
    The imagery was fabulous, the flow was flawless, & the emotions were strong. 5.5

    "My happiness, my sadness

    comes like tidal waves in the ocean"
    ^ I love those lines!

    One of your best! (The poem) ;] 5.5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.