Comments : Better

  • 16 years ago

    by limp

    31 isn't old! you're young young young, still! this is sort of sad, but also kind of rhythmy and bouncy which is nice. thanks for commenting moine!
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  • 16 years ago

    by carissalynn

    This was so deep and flowing, i loved it [[=
    carissa

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

    Best Wishes
    Wallace