Great poem!!..very beautifully penned n i didn't find any errors!...well done!....very powerful emotioms!...n i can soo relate to it!...Good job1..5/5!

My hole is filler
[[Erm. "Filler" isn't a word. It'd be "more full."]]

Anyways.
I don't really like non-rhyming poems; the flow really shuts off on them and this was one of them. But, I liked the concept and the idea.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 4.5