Again, amazing. you did another well done job. the emtions are dripping off of every word that is so very well chosen. The flow was of couse perfect, and the sturture flawless. Again 5/5

I can so much relate to this poem you have no clue. I loved the way you portayed everyone else then at the end portaried your loved one. That was the best part this is a great peice of work. Great Job take care Plot121...

I really liked it, i mean the way she talks at the beginning she seems to heartless and cold but with the comment of tears of joy at the end we get to see a softer side

Beautiful ending..lol...and the poem flowed wel too.....differnt style though..but it had an amazing effect on the poem!..kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

Wow I really liked it at first it was really sad and it seemed like she was super depressed etc but in the end you find out that shes happy because of her little brother (or at least thats what I got out of it) Nice write. The ending was totally unexpected.