This is SO cute girly! i am so happy you found someone so perfect for you. hehe love the poem.

I really like this poem going on my favorites
hey if i ever get a myspace could I put this poem on there with your name?
write me back please

Wow.. I think that you should have named this poem "Us". I had no idea you could rhyme so many different words with us! It was beautiful though, I definitely fell in love with this piece. I couldn't help but think of my beloved boyfriend whenever I read this. It touched my heart in so many ways. A nice, smooth flow and very neat and organized. The work of a true professional! Keep it up. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~