Comments : They can tell( child abuse)

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Wow that hard to be hard to get passed if it is from your life. Excellent poem.
    i loved the message, and the word choice was nothing less than perfect. the flow was a little off, but eh who cares, the emtion was strong, and raw once again, you did an excellent job. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by moonlil

    It is really terrible to read such things knowing that you went through this. I don't know what to say. I just hope that there are no others who have to go through this.
    It's a great poem though.

  • 16 years ago

    by sadeyes

    This poem made me cry

  • 16 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    I really like this poem as well

    keep up the good job