''make her big head swirl.'' HAHA, that made me giggle.

I enjoyed this, the opening was very strong and from there on it just kept getting better and better.
The imagery was beautifully done, and I liked the repetition you used as I thought it made the poem very powerful.

Comment #2:
I LOVE the entire idea of this poem. The phrase you have to go there to come back was just perfect! I can't say enough about it! :) Amazing piece with a great message!
~Midnight Sun