Comments : Indifference

  • 16 years ago

    by ibelievedhim

    This poem is very sad :(
    But it is very well written, I like it a lot!

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    "As silent as trees,
    I am carried away by a passing breeze"

    I love that couplet, it portrays the hopelessness and emptiness perfectly...
    Well done!
    5/5
    *Gem*