Comments : Eternity

  • 16 years ago

    by Lesbian Natalie

    Everything on this earth is a mystery...isn't it??

  • 16 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    {Sorry don'y know what happened up there}

    GREAT poem!! Nice, powerful topic with words to match.

    Note: "Dare to life your life
    takke chances if you're able"

    Shouldn't it read: "Dare to live your life
    take chances if you're able"?

    Otherwise a fantastic piece!

    5/5

    Josie