Nitin
Excellent poem. The imagery and flow are great. So much emotin went into this poem. Very deep feelings.

Wonder if meaning every single word
Against my will, heart still bleeds for you
Time has only changed your heart
Still trapped in what you put me through

Love this ending it sums everything up so well.
Great job dost.
Love Cindy

This poem is amazingly brilliant. I love every single bit of it. Just today I was thinking of a poem to write like this, and you wrote everything. I don't know what to say. Perfect. Flawless. Excellent write. Never stop!! 5/5

` Liz =]

This could have been written about someone I know and hate...lol...you know what they say about paybacks?...you've said it very well...

"Every turn of my life, I'll pray
People like you should live no more
Though time has come for payback
Many murders you have to pay for"

I think in the grander scheme of things....those such as the poem subject matter will get their just rewards....nicely written....

Beautifully penned poem, really fabulous work, i love the way you use words it really makes an enjoyable read i can't wait for more xox lithium

"Crashing all of your dreams
Now seems to be my only aim
Almost killing you everyday
Seems to be my favorite game"

Very powerful stanza Nitin.. it really made me think. Sometimes we do these things without even thinking of what we're doing, unaware of the consequences and wof what damage we may be doing...
5/5 m'dear
*Gem*

Wow! nice poem of you...excellent!

Lol, this was just so gr8
I love the anger put into this piece
this shows so much emotions..lol!
gr8 piece bro
keep it up
xxxxx

Nitin
Congrats on this poem being nominated for the weekly :) You still have your magic.

This is deffiently differnt than other poems i have read.. but its good 5/5

That's a beautiful poem =)

It made me remember times of my life. A great poem makes other people connect, which means you're an awesome writer.

Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

5/5. excellent poem. so full of emotion and it flows beautifully. keep writing.

OMG that was really good... i liked it a lot.... it was like i could feel it!!! VERY GOOD!!!

MEGAN

Ouch!!! Your cruel intentions really got to me. I wonder where it came from. Brilliantly written, very up front, it speaks for itself. I guess some of us are unfortunate to feel this way. Love the poem, Excellent job!!!!!!!!

This poem was wonderful.each stanza was greatly written.the last stanza was perfect.this was unique and entirely different from all other poems.all i can say is that this poem is beautifully written.
keep up the good work my friend.
best wishes
and take care.