Comments : It never was

  • 17 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Expressed in simplicity, but full of the emotions we all feel when the one we love is out of reach. Nicely done!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem , love the feeling, and emotions in it ,great job .your friend Tracy5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    It keeps me awake
    It invades my space

    I loved these lines. Beautiful like many of your pieces.