Wow. very powerful poem
had a great effect. it was intense
i loved it and i'm sorri 4 wat happnd 2 u
no 1 should b made 2 feel this way
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Wow
who knew you could feel so strong
and yet be so young
I love this poem
Because it shows how even the smallest kids
can hurt

Im surprised this poem isnt rated higher or more popular, it is absoluetly amazing and you are so creative with all of your poem names.

5/5

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Ohhh this was so heartbreaking..and yet written so beautifully.
The pain and emotions scream the words in this, really tugging on the reader's heart.
Flow is perfect throughout, and imagery was beautifully done.