Well, the word choice seemed interesting. Despite the fact that some of the words aren't that uncommon, you used them in such a way that they sounded better than most.
Also, it flowed really well for a non rhyming poem, so kudos for that.
What I didn't quite like is the repeat of the last for line before the final one. And it seemed to end abruptly.
Not too bad.
4/5

Beautifully written dark poem. the word choice was excellent dripping with emtions, the flow was great the imagery vivid and the message was clear. 5/5

I always say the shorter the poem the stronger it should be. Well done! 5/5

-Liz-

Wonderful poem.. very simple words but still the ending was strong.. also you described everything really well.. great job :D

Wow amazing poem....just beautiful and moving and touching...simple and powerful

----tara

I really like how you compared this person's feelings to objects of the ocean (waves, shell, creatures). They made this all the more easier to picture in my head.

It was a simple poem, yet will written. Good job.