Nice short poem. 4/5 there is a couple of misspellings but everything else is great. I personally love sad poems, especially those which are both able to be related to and able to hold attention, yours had both qualities. well done

Great emotive poem. This was wonderful. I didn't actually pick up any misspellings in this one but anyway great job.
cheers, josh

Very sad nessa.. I feel the same way i do the same please try and stop tho..