Comments : High and Mighty

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    You just might find happiness
    Step off your throne and see
    Come and wallow for a while
    With the lowly ones like me.
    ^^^
    I love this ending stanza. Straight to the point direct message, that should be heard loud and clear.
    Wonderfully Penned!

    Take care
    Luanne

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Beautiful expressive emotions poems you penned here Dear.....yet well inspirations written!

    Bert.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr M

    Ok, now that's telling them!

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Well done....like the message!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great poem!
    The emotions were so great.
    I really like the message.
    Really enjoyed reading this.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, this poem is superbly written, it is so deep!
    Every stanza is amazing, the whole piece holds a lot of emotions and very captivating imagery.
    My favorite stanza is:
    -Classifying,stereotyping
    What gives you the right
    With stone in hand,
    Have you made no mistakes in your life?-
    Great job, 5/5 from me