Great poem man, check out my poem Vault Within, similar set up if I remmeber -don't really read my poems after I make them so forgive me if I'm inccorect. I also voted.

This is amazing...I have only been writing for a few short years but this is one of the better poems i have read.. i can relate to this poem alot

Im speechless ! amazing work! 5/5

This is sad indeed. All this hidden sadness deep inside cannot keep for a eternity. Never be afraid to cry, no crying is no form of weakness. If you can cry it means you're strong enough to let those sad emotions out and can now smile from the heart, well done, kel.

Very well written. Lots of emotion and contradiction. An interesting read. The struggle with oneself to either release the pain or smother it. I enjoyed reading this. Keep it up.

Rebbeca

I like the use of dialouge here...makes the poem more intense. Good work Saul. Nik