That was good. the flow was almost flawless, the word choice was good, and the emtion was clear. I liked it, but I think if the word choice would have been a little stronger, the emtions would have been more powerful. Still a good read. 4/5

I liked the flow, it was pretty amazing. The emotions could be stronger- as said above- with a little stronger word choice. I love the meaning and I thought it portrayed great emotions.
Keep it up..
Elaine.

P.S thanks so much for the comment on my poem.

I liked it. The flow was good. I liked the stanza with the line about crimson tears. over all, it was a great poem filled with true emmotions, 5/5

If I could have a quater for every time I felt like that, I'd be rich!!! Great flow! 5/5

Josie