Comments : Wondering with you

  • 16 years ago

    by just me

    This is such a simple poem but it's very very good. I'm addin it as one of my fav's (i dont do that to very many cause i only have like 2 on there)
    I love this little masterpeice.
    <3
    L.C
    *plz comment my work*

  • 16 years ago

    by Laurie Tran

    GOODNESS GRACIOUS .
    I LOVEE` this poem .

    the flow + the emotions + the words = AMAZING .

    oh.. on this line "When I see walking towards me"
    did you meant "When I see you walking towards me?"

    great poem, excellent job !