Comments : My First

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael

    Though I am 15 accept this advice, open your heart to another, and never hate the gender (don't know your orientation so playing it safe). For you see, we all get as we deserve sooner or later, that is life. I voted- just to let you know.

  • 16 years ago

    by jenn

    NIcE

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Great! This poem rox and I love it! EXCELLENT!
    ~Kayla

  • 15 years ago

    by Dying Beautifully

    Wow your definetly experienced in writing. I loved the flow and the emotion you used in this piece. I know what this is like and can tell how you felt once it occured to you.
    Great Job.

    Rebbeca

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Very nice work. I love how you aren't afraid to open up your heart to us. Loved it. Nik