Comments : What Happens When Your Smile Fades

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I love this poem and relate to it lot, i understand about putting on an act pretending your ok and not crying until your alone, very good poem well done xxxxxxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by lost soul

    I really liked the way that you portrayed the pain in this poem, a job well done! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Omg! SARAH!!!
    I've missed you so much! I finally found your name!!
    I loved this poem a lot.
    You've very talented, m'lovely.
    Keep up the good work!
    5/5
    xoxShorteexox [Heather]