Bravo!!! standing ovation!!! very well written!! keep up the good work!
god bless

The future is hard to even begin to think about..i can relate to this poem..

Good job it's nice to know i'm not the only one thinking about the future

Inspirational piece of work. You entered this in the competition at PFP Club, and got second place in the August contest which i
am sorry but have only just posted results.
I thought that this had good flow, rhyming and a very strong sense of power and belief.
It really opened my eyes to the future and i thought it was fantastic.
With love, Tara-Kay
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Great work really enjoyed reading that, keep it up

Good poem,keep up the good work