I liked it i gave you a 5, it was great but there is just one bit that just doesn't fit in the poem "If I knew back then I'd start bidding at your birth.()
You truly are a prize to be won." i dont think that guys or girls are a prize to be one, it just sounds selfish and shallow, i mean you can win there hearts and all but a prize to win, just doesn't sound right. sorry bout the honest comment but it's just . well maybe if you have time you could vote and comment on some of mine, but overall, great writing, bye