Comments : One Night Of Bliss (Collab)

  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    With each collab we write. Our friendship grows. This was such a pleasure to write. You are really teaching me so much about expanding myself as a writer. Thank you for everything.
    You are a wonderful writer and friend.
    Love Cindy

  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    With each collab we write. Our friendship grows. This was such a pleasure to write. You are really teaching me so much about expanding myself as a writer. Thank you for everything.
    You are a wonderful writer and friend.
    Love Cindy

  • 13 years ago

    by Lithium

    FANTASIC this is really really good, again you have such a way with words its really unlike anything i've even read, you inspire me to keep writing and get to the level at which i see you today. great work!

  • 13 years ago

    by Gem

    "Blend with my soul tonight
    And let me breathe for you
    Wrap my heart within yours
    Melting one body, no more two"

    That stanza was so beautiful. Each collab from you two just gets better and better!
    It was romantic yet sexy, a beautiful combination!
    Bravo sweets!
    5/5
    *Gem*

    (And no, i don't know any wolf movies really apart from dog soldiers and that was a gory werewolf movie, lol. Hilarious though!)

  • 13 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Well done on another wonderful collab! You and Cindy do such an awesome job...can't tell who wrote which stanza...your styles mesh so well...

    Kiss me beneath my skin
    Drink my lips sweet like wine
    Play with my lonely fingertips
    Touch every vein of mine

    ^ This verse is so beautiful and romantic!

    Congrats on another masterpiece! All the best, Debbie

  • 13 years ago

    by Barry

    Well!! you two have blown the a few cobwebs away with this.......sensational write....
    Nitin you just come into my domain as a poet
    well done!! love the poem but these lines
    Squeeze this trigger of love
    Gently blow my soul away
    With your fingers of magic
    Leave scars for every day
    just awesome....... excellent well done!!

  • 13 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Like I told Cindy this poem is really great. Very sensual and passion filled. You amaze me how well the two of you write together.
    Keep it up.

    Blend with my soul tonight
    And let me breathe for you
    Wrap my heart within yours
    Melting one body, no more two

    Pacifying our bodies needs
    Losing myself in your kiss
    Your touch leaving memories
    Of our one night of bliss

    These are my favorite parts.
    All the best my friend.
    Ben

  • 13 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Wow, now thats what I call passion. Great collab indeed. Both of your talents blend perfectly in every poem you write. Keep it up.

  • 13 years ago

    by amanda flood

    Wow excellent u decride it so well if only it stayed like that forever [love] its a pain after a while lol

  • 13 years ago

    by chavii

    Such beautiful and passionate poem , brilliantly penned by you two.keep it up !

    Best wishes
    chavii.

  • 13 years ago

    by That Crazy Guy Chris

    Wow you just have a gift for writing poetry. This one was really good though, my favorite. Well good job man. Good job to Cindy too. Take it easy

  • 12 years ago

    by Diam0ndStrength315

    Wow..this is really good.your work together is awesome.keep at it

  • 12 years ago

    by matt

    Your poeme is so good but.. writting a poem with the help of someone is not so great