Nice one, really deep and meaningful.

5/5

i odnt know what to write lol im speechless

A very beautiful poem that showed not only the grief of the person who passed but of the family and friends of that person, It also shows everyones worst nightmare, going to there own funeral....

Very touching

i give you a 5/5

Just like the nightmares i have.... :)
dont worry bout that

my favorite bit is

As people begin to leave,
The gravestone comes to sight,
My name rests upon it.
I fade away with the light.

your a beautiful writer
please keep it up...

Beautiful, it gave me chills as i read this. =) you are an amazing writer. keep up the good work =).

-Jessyka-

The ending made it perfect- I have a problem with endings so I really appreciate how well you did with this one..