Again very thought provaoking, Your style is intresting, and diffrent, I like diffrent, again try leaving out the shortcuts, other than that everthing is absoulty perfect, I doubt I have have ever read anything so beautiful, and so true, The word choice is of course briallant, and it speaks to my soul, I really like this poem. you are amazing 5/5 and you have earned a fan that will keep reading. 5/5 although I wish I cold give you more.

Oh man. I agree with Vanessa this deserves higher than a 5/5 but its all you can give. Grr.
once again great work

This poem was also very deep and full of emotion. You are a very talented poem writer!

I have to say, this is AMAZING... i love this piece...

Hey! This is great!

Hey! This is great!

Hey! This is great!