Comments : Sprung

  • 16 years ago

    by just me

    I love this...u make things flow like really great! This is good and very cute. (our lil secret....mayb i am 2)
    <3
    L.C

  • Wow i really like this poem......great poem..5/5..........check out some of my poems if u would thankz...

  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Thats awesome. I like how you used the title in the first and last lines. It flowed so perfectly. It was a very sweet message and the way you said it was great! I love it! Keep it up!

    ~mo~