Comments : 17

  • 18 years ago

    by Alma

    Wow! powerful poem
    I really loved it your use of Repetition made a nice effect
    your last 2 lines were very powerful and made a nice end to a great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by why is life so miserable

    WOW AWESOME POEM SO DEEP AND JUST GREAT 5/5 DEF!

  • 18 years ago

    by fatal bliss is the best way to die

    Real emotional AWESOME!!! 5/5 :)

  • 18 years ago

    by homebound

    Great job on this one! Filled with emotion and thought. The 2 last lines concluded the whole poem and made a strong final impact. keep it up! i cant wait to read more from you!
    ~Love and Trust~

  • 17 years ago

    by she

    Like the last lines,great flow