This was wonderful...I could see the imagery in my head and the words flowed nicely. *5/5*

Alyson

Great write...baeutifully done!...excellent imagery too...kp writing!..5/5!
xxPoojaxx

I thought it was beautiful and well written and the flow was great, 5/5

Cares one's body,
cares is ment perhaps to be caresses

Well written, nice flow, beautiful imangery, greay word choice, simple yet clear emtion.
5/5