Jess,

every single line in this poem fits perfectly,not too long, not too short. Although the theme is sad and painful,I still feel this is your greatest work to date. It is such a heartwrencing read that holds you from start to finish, but that would hold true even if I didn't know YOU wrote it. the whole thing just breathes so much strong GENUINE emotion. This is my new favorite poem :] in all of poemworld.