This is a great poem with a great subject. i like every word of it as i feel feelings and emotions through out this wonderful poem.
as always, your words amaze me. you are a great writer, keep it up.

a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

Great work!!...lovely subject!and the poem seems very perfect.Beautifully penned!..Good choice of words too..kp up the good wrk!
easy 5/5!
xxPoojaxx

Great poem. I liked it. Because it has a nice flow and great word choice. 5/5

Good poem.
It flowed well and the rhyming didn't seem forced.

'Lyrics as black as coal
With somber beat and tune
I prayed it would be heard
But when it was, 'twas too soon'

Loved it 5/5

[Sarah]