A lovely poem. Very well written.

Melissa...this poem really touched me. The sentiment hit home. I love your passion for writing in which we all share!

Amazing, you truly have a talent, excellent work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

A truly exquistite poem Melissa.
This part is exceptional:

But oh how my tongue longed
to spit ideas at people
who had their own
and could lay them gently upon stone,

Wonderful writing, my dear :-)

This is well written and rather lovely.