Hey, i've seen your post and thought about passing by...=)
your poem is really nice...it's something i can easily relate to...a beautiful way to express your feelings...i especially loved the 3rd stanza, though the whole is great...
5/5
keep going
*isabel*

I LOVED this poem so much. Even if it's sad, it's good.

Great job!!!

5/5

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

Losing the love of life is really a heartbreaking experience. Your poem is excellently written describing the love you have for your beloved. I love the wording and the imagery :)

Tc
Fsams