This is a good poem i like it a lot.

I liked this poem. I really liked how you made the stanzas short, and kept the poem short and simple. The ending was my favorite part.. cause its so true when something so terrible like that happens to a family it leaves a scar that will never go away and it haunts everyone from family to friends for the rest of their lives, it can even rip families apart. nice job. The fist stanza was my favorite out of them all.

The imagery in this poem was absoutly breath taking. amazingly well written, short but powerful 5/5 Keep up the good work. so it took so long to comment on this poem, I just found the post! lol

Ollymoley.
The emotions displayed were deep.
Flow was as good as it always is with you.
Insight was pretty decent, concidering.
You did wonders with this one.
Overall Rating: 5.0/5

Awe, this was so sad. It fully portrayed a theme of death and despair tearing a family apart.

"to much for the child to bare" = 'to' should be 'too'.

Overall it was very good. Deeply sad and dark, but good.